Shades of Pale Green

September 19, 2007

I like to wallow
in the morose…
undoubtedly,
the morose
has its own charms

I feel comfortable
there, in the trenches
away from the
maddening cheers,
and shallow celebrations
of success

Of course, i know
I’m just being facile,
the depth is just
an abyss, without end
without meaning

The comfort zones
have clipped my wings,
disinfected me with
sterile purity,
crowned me the king
of the no man’s land

If I take a refuge
in obscurity,
it’s not pride,
just cowardice…
it’s a protection,
against judgment

Yes I like to wallow
in the morose,
and let it grow
on me, like moss.
the morose, undoubtedly
has its charm

10 Responses to “Shades of Pale Green”

  1. Vi Says:

    This simply begs another verse.

  2. IW Says:

    Inspired by Silo’s comment on Fair(y) Tale ? You can write in this genre even while sleep-walking.. :)

  3. asuph Says:

    vi: i presume you’re writing it? :) thanks for the comment.

    iw: :) that’s how I wrote this. i was going to say this was inspired by … but then you’re turning into an oracle.

  4. Shruti Says:

    Hi asuph,

    The last three stanzas are brilliant. This dichotomy between letting all go and grasping everything is troubling. Contradictions. If there is a heaven, then it must be a place without contradictions.

  5. Aria Says:

    “the morose, undoubtedly
    has its charm”
    This is my kind of stuff.. too good.. I had lost interest in posting yet again .. but this has put me back into one of those mood..

  6. pinkemeralds Says:

    I havent been here in awhile, now that I read this…I don’t know why? This is powerful!

  7. Celine Says:

    This poetry so identifies with my feelings these days, which I know are transitory.

    Excellent poem!

  8. asuph Says:

    Shruti: Thanks a lot. Your comments take my poems to higher level than they are ;-)

    Aria: Thanks. But I don’t see any posts?

    Pinkemralds: Thanks! Visit as often as you want :) .

    celine: Welcome to my blog. And thanks for the appreciation.

  9. dracegannon Says:

    A superbly written poem expressing soft pastel colors and tones. Nice stuff. An overcast of peace and serenity
    remains, after reading this work of art. Bravo! A job well done. Please stop by to read some of my poetry and tell a friend, too. Keep Sharing.

  10. dracegannon Says:

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