We never mangaged
The motions of goodbye well
You were busy with
New beginnings
I was busy
Reminiscing, savouring
The bitter aftertaste
Wallowing, almost
The lose strands
(Like your hair
On those rare days
You’d let them be)
Oh well, they’ll haunt
They always do
I was born dramatizing
You liked to say
(Am I still obsessed with
What you liked to say?)
Not today
Today it’s time
To rest the past,
In all its troubled glory
Okay, that’s a little
Over the top
But seriously
Tomorrow I want to forget
That I want to forget
(Forget) even this obsession
With moving on
Which holds me back
Into today
Hey asuph, saw your mail. Checked my account after a long time. I am here, reading everything.
This is a really nice poem.Reading a good poem from you after a loong time.Cud relate totally to it.
Thanks silo, but you broke my heart. You mean all that I wrote recently is a crap!
okay just kidding. i don’t have a heart.
regards,
asuph
Good stuff !
thanks mayuresh 🙂
hi asuph
your poetry is just so divine- the simplicity and imagery that you use is rare.
you have a gift.
oh, and about the literary review. do you read this columnist called pradeep sebastian? his column is called endpaper. wonderfully gifted. i think i am in love with him 🙂
thanks prat. that’s a huge compliment.
i’ve read a bit of pradeep sebastian and yes he’s very interesting. i think he’s taken tho :))
do visit again,
asuph.
1. I don’t need to condone/condemn other person’s drug addiction/alcoholism. I don’t. It’s not for me to decide how others lead/waste their lives. Yes I will still like their work.
2. Lata mangeshkar is rumoured to have slept with a some of her music directors. Would you hate her singing because of that? The sad part is in the word of media it’s hard to get a break. Again, one can judge the work despite of how one got a chance. And I’m interested in the work.
regards,
asuph
The lose strands
(Like your hair
On those rare days
You’d let them be)
Oh well, they’ll haunt
They always do
very pictorial n vivid. But nonetheless u rnt off d huk !
ah red. after all the pradeep sebastian business i’m glad the comments are back on track. thanks. and i kind of enjoy the hoook.
cheers,
asuph
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